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by BCdeb
March 14th, 2020, 4:50 pm
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: The autobiography I'm working on. Please critique me.
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The autobiography I'm working on. Please critique me.

The title is: Tears of Blood Chapter 1 Lies and Dreams Lies, lies and more lies. Our parents repeat them in the name of tradition. Santa Claus ruled until you found out the truth. I was 7 years old when I snooped around the upper shelf of the spare room closet and discovered a decorated parcel with ...
by BCdeb
March 14th, 2020, 4:42 pm
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: Feedback needed on poem - 'Remember'
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Views: 5115

Re: Feedback needed on poem - 'Remember'

Hello,
I loved your poem. I suffer from depression and I love the do's and don'ts. Remember is a powerful word. Good job.