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- July 17th, 2023, 12:01 pm
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Topic: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
WHERE THE LEGEND LIES by M. E. Marino first 250-words Up on a Pennsylvania Mountain top, a murder of crows swooped into the valley, yawed across a steel-blue sky, then glided past the dull yellow autumn sun, casting a V-shaped shadow over slopping evergreens. A bird fell out of formation and nosediv...
- June 30th, 2020, 11:39 am
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Topic: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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1st Page Critique Request
Title: The Footsteps Forged Suspense Fiction CHAPTER 1 She will find him. With the innocence of a child and the blind faith of a prophet, the matter of her existence crossed the Gibbous moon. As a speck, it glinted off the lake's skin and along the tops of balding trees. Given the early morning h...
- March 16th, 2020, 4:30 pm
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Topic: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
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NEW - QUERY CRITIQUE - FOOTSTEPS FORGED
Hello, Nathan. The following is my Query for my completed Adult Suspense Fiction novel. Thank you very much for your assistance in getting this Query presentable. My address, phone number, and email are on at the top right corner. Then the query begins: Dear Jessica, When I read that you were looki...