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by Shireena
February 14th, 2020, 10:26 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Anna Bell in ToyLand - Chapter I: The Fall Genre: Young Adult, Fantasy It is a cold, dark windy night. Anna Bell lies next to a great oak tree sobbing. She hears her drunken father’s words echoing over and over “you shit, shit, shit’. She can still smell his alcohol breath as his fist struck her fac...