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by Quarterwit
February 12th, 2022, 1:51 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 208
Views: 179429

Re: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: MAN DOWN! Genre: Thriller “Man down! Man down!” Ducking even lower, hiding his head in his shoulders, glad to be alive, the Chief Inspector looked across at his companion, “We can’t let this carry on. Is there nothing we can do, Sergeant? He's already hit six policemen. Six highly trained pol...
by Quarterwit
February 13th, 2020, 8:22 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 208
Views: 179429

Re: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Man Down YA “Man down! Man down!” “God, not another. Is there nothing we can do Sergeant? That’s six highly trained, armed policemen he’s hit already. I can’t even see where he’s shooting from.” The grey haired, hard looking sergeant, was ex-army and knew a thing or two about being shot at. He remov...