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- February 12th, 2022, 1:51 am
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Title: MAN DOWN! Genre: Thriller “Man down! Man down!” Ducking even lower, hiding his head in his shoulders, glad to be alive, the Chief Inspector looked across at his companion, “We can’t let this carry on. Is there nothing we can do, Sergeant? He's already hit six policemen. Six highly trained pol...
- February 13th, 2020, 8:22 pm
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Topic: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Man Down YA “Man down! Man down!” “God, not another. Is there nothing we can do Sergeant? That’s six highly trained, armed policemen he’s hit already. I can’t even see where he’s shooting from.” The grey haired, hard looking sergeant, was ex-army and knew a thing or two about being shot at. He remov...