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by aldernans
May 10th, 2020, 10:36 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 81
Views: 52243

Re: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Most people hear about something tragic and say, “Oh, that’s horrible.” They go on about their business, and live their lives. I’m not most people. I don’t just hear about tragedy. I feel it. My mama says I’m too empathetic, but my dad says I have the feelings of an angel. Empathy, angel, it all boi...
by aldernans
April 3rd, 2020, 4:03 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 42
Views: 33818

Re: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog

Please consider my 78,000-word YA mystery novel, BUTTERFLY WARS: What Really Happened to Grandmother? This is a retelling of the original Red Riding Hood story and told in three perspectives: The Wolf, The Grandmother and Little Red Riding Hood. This story is set in a small town with queer grotesque...
by aldernans
April 3rd, 2020, 3:43 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 81
Views: 52243

Re: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Chapter 1 January 15, 1965 From the diary of GoGo Storm Most people hear about something tragic and say, “Oh, that’s horrible.” They go on about their business, and live their lives. I’m not most people. I don’t just hear about tragedy. I feel it. Literally. My Mama says I’m too empathetic, but my D...