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- January 6th, 2020, 1:44 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: The Sensory Garden - Women's Fiction
- Replies: 13
- Views: 4681
- don't need to use so many proper names. Really just Helen's. - can you make the stakes bigger than not being able to pay mortgage - how it will effect Helen as a person/emotionally - don't need paragraph about current situation in Australia - don't give away the ending - leave us wanting more - do...
- December 27th, 2019, 12:41 pm
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Topic: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
- Replies: 54
- Views: 41002
Dear Agent’s Name: Ardent is women’s fiction complete at 80,000 words. It is a story of wild versus urban, woven with magic like the writing of Gail Anderson-Dargatz and Juliet Marillier. Cassidy isn’t afraid of nights alone in the wilderness when she’s roamed away from their little farm. She’s afra...