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by bankoferin
October 24th, 2019, 4:55 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 152
Views: 124376

Re: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog

Dear <Agent>, <INSERT how I found the agent, something specific, e.g., “I saw you are looking for xxx from your recent #mswl tweet… because you represent xxx comp author, I think my novel will be a great fit for you.> Eliza Clark is a 32-year-old alcoholic who believes that she must not deserve to b...
by bankoferin
October 7th, 2019, 9:48 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 207
Views: 177992

Re: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: Proof of Love Genre: Literary Fiction/Women's Fiction As Eliza entered her apartment, her phone buzzed impatiently in her back pocket. She pulled it out and glanced at the screen as she stepped out of her shoes. One new voicemail. She must have missed the call when she was underground in the ...