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by bankoferin
October 24th, 2019, 4:55 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 28
Views: 16778

Re: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog

Dear <Agent>, <INSERT how I found the agent, something specific, e.g., “I saw you are looking for xxx from your recent #mswl tweet… because you represent xxx comp author, I think my novel will be a great fit for you.> Eliza Clark is a 32-year-old alcoholic who believes that she must not deserve to b...
by bankoferin
October 7th, 2019, 9:48 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 46
Views: 23372

Re: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: Proof of Love Genre: Literary Fiction/Women's Fiction Eliza reaches for the piece of paper from Lawyer What’s-His-Name with a trembling hand. She blinks away the image of another pair of shaking hands: her father’s when the alcohol had started to wear off. He’d hide it by gripping whatever im...