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by jen
June 13th, 2011, 12:17 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 213
Views: 132460

Re: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog

Dear Monsieur Bransford . France 1660 and King Louis XIV's lustrous crowning glory has forsaken him . A remedy must be sought , tout'e de suite ! Teasing through wigs , choking on powder and gently touching upon the beauty , etiquette and hygiene faux par of the period , POMPADOU comes face to face ...
by jen
September 21st, 2010, 6:24 am
Forum: Ask Nathan
Topic: Old Ask Nathan Thread
Replies: 793
Views: 220040

Re: Ask Nathan

Dear Nathan My question refers specifically to copying and pasting within queries . Recently after sending you my query , I checked sent mail to see it had gone through O.K and was MORTIFIED to realise that the font and format which you request appeared completely awry ! Trying to remain calm , I lo...
by jen
April 2nd, 2010, 8:48 pm
Forum: Writing
Topic: Will my MC's name kill my chances?
Replies: 24
Views: 7313

Re: Will my MC's name kill my chances?

Why dont you call him.....wait for it...

Shadow ? Thats a great name , enigmatic .

All the best of luck !
by jen
April 2nd, 2010, 8:11 pm
Forum: Writing
Topic: Will my MC's name kill my chances?
Replies: 24
Views: 7313

Re: Will my MC's name kill my chances?

Sorry...the name sounds way too much like halitosis . Flossing may help .