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- April 21st, 2010, 8:09 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query: A BEAUTIFUL MONSTER
- Replies: 20
- Views: 7479
Re: Query: A BEAUTIFUL MONSTER
So I decided to send the (this) query letter as it was and got 4 Manuscripts requests from agents. Now I'm even more nervous.
- April 17th, 2010, 3:56 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query: A BEAUTIFUL MONSTER
- Replies: 20
- Views: 7479
Re: Query: A BEAUTIFUL MONSTER
NEWEST QUERY: When Seventeen-year-old Nicola Summers goes outside to take out the trash, she finds her boyfriend Tristan chained in the driveway after being beaten by a street gang. Horrified at the bruises on his face and blood on his shirt, she doesn’t understand his raging desperation for her to...
- April 16th, 2010, 10:20 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query: A BEAUTIFUL MONSTER
- Replies: 20
- Views: 7479
Re: Query: A BEAUTIFUL MONSTER
Query: When Seventeen-year-old Nicola Summers goes outside to take out the trash, she finds her boyfriend Tristan chained in the driveway after being beaten by a street gang. Horrified at the bruises on his face and blood on his shirt, she doesn’t understand his raging desperation for her to leave, ...
- April 14th, 2010, 11:39 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query: A BEAUTIFUL MONSTER
- Replies: 20
- Views: 7479
Re: Query: A BEAUTIFUL MONSTER
Query Attempt # 2 Dear [Agent Name]: Seventeen-year-old Nicola Summers is surprised to find her boyfriend Tristan chained in the driveway after being beaten by a street gang. She doesn’t understand his desperation for her to abandon him, especially when a storm is rolling in, and does her best to li...
- April 13th, 2010, 11:24 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query: A BEAUTIFUL MONSTER
- Replies: 20
- Views: 7479
Query: A BEAUTIFUL MONSTER
I was told I needed to include more on my query, so here is what I've come up with. Feel free to offer suggestions and opinions! Thank you. NEWEST QUERY AT THE END!! Seventeen-year-old Nicola Summers is surprised to find her boyfriend Tristan chained in the driveway after being beaten by a street ga...
- April 7th, 2010, 11:16 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query: Gilded Wings
- Replies: 25
- Views: 9352
- April 6th, 2010, 3:55 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query: Gilded Wings
- Replies: 25
- Views: 9352
Re: Query: Gilded Wings
LATEST QUERY: For seventeen-year-old Nicola Summers, finding her boyfriend Tristan chained to the driveway after being beaten by a street gang was not what she expected to find when taking out the trash. She doesn’t understand his desperation for her to abandon him, especially when a storm is rolli...
- April 6th, 2010, 12:02 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query: Gilded Wings
- Replies: 25
- Views: 9352
Re: Query: Gilded Wings
QUERY For seventeen-year-old Nicola Summers, finding her boyfriend Tristan chained to the driveway after being mugged by a street gang was not part of the plan. Beaten and knowing the rain is underway, he rejects Nicola’s help. Determined, Nicola tries to liberate him, but when the rain arrives and...
- April 5th, 2010, 1:25 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query- Isabella Vampirella (EVIL EDITOR response at end)
- Replies: 36
- Views: 12787
Re: Query- Isabella Vampirella (EVIL EDITOR response at end)
Nice! Don't worry about the name (Vampirella). I actually like Isabella Vampirella, it's catchy and it sounds appropriate. There is a movie called Trolls and their main character is names Harry Potter just like J.K. Rowling's Harry Potter. So really don't worry about the name.
- April 4th, 2010, 4:43 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query: Gilded Wings
- Replies: 25
- Views: 9352
Re: QUERY: FEATHERS (YA -Fantasy-Romance)
Query ____________ For seventeen-year-old Nicola Summers, finding her boyfriend Tristan chained to her driveway was not part of the plan. Struggling to break free from the restraints he was left in after being assaulted by a street gang, he rejects Nicola’s help, knowing the rain is underway. With ...
- April 3rd, 2010, 10:07 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query: Gilded Wings
- Replies: 25
- Views: 9352
Re: QUERY: FEATHERS (YA -Fantasy-Romance)
Feel free to offer your thoughts and advice, and I'll try to fix those on my query. Thank you. ________________ For seventeen-year-old Nicola Summers, finding her boyfriend Tristan chained to her driveway was not part of the plan. Struggling to break free from his restraints, he rejects Nicola’s hel...
- April 1st, 2010, 8:32 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query: Gilded Wings
- Replies: 25
- Views: 9352
Query: Gilded Wings
I'm new to the forum. This is the first draft of my query. Feel free to speak your mind, offer your suggestions, and thank you in advance for you help. By the way, this is just the body of the query. NEWEST QUERY AT THE END! _____________ In the midst of a thunderstorm, seventeen-year-old Nicola Sum...