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by hanna2494
April 21st, 2010, 8:09 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query: A BEAUTIFUL MONSTER
Replies: 20
Views: 3120

Re: Query: A BEAUTIFUL MONSTER

So I decided to send the (this) query letter as it was and got 4 Manuscripts requests from agents. Now I'm even more nervous.
by hanna2494
April 17th, 2010, 3:56 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query: A BEAUTIFUL MONSTER
Replies: 20
Views: 3120

Re: Query: A BEAUTIFUL MONSTER

NEWEST QUERY: When Seventeen-year-old Nicola Summers goes outside to take out the trash, she finds her boyfriend Tristan chained in the driveway after being beaten by a street gang. Horrified at the bruises on his face and blood on his shirt, she doesn’t understand his raging desperation for her to...
by hanna2494
April 16th, 2010, 10:20 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query: A BEAUTIFUL MONSTER
Replies: 20
Views: 3120

Re: Query: A BEAUTIFUL MONSTER

Query: When Seventeen-year-old Nicola Summers goes outside to take out the trash, she finds her boyfriend Tristan chained in the driveway after being beaten by a street gang. Horrified at the bruises on his face and blood on his shirt, she doesn’t understand his raging desperation for her to leave, ...
by hanna2494
April 14th, 2010, 11:39 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query: A BEAUTIFUL MONSTER
Replies: 20
Views: 3120

Re: Query: A BEAUTIFUL MONSTER

Query Attempt # 2 Dear [Agent Name]: Seventeen-year-old Nicola Summers is surprised to find her boyfriend Tristan chained in the driveway after being beaten by a street gang. She doesn’t understand his desperation for her to abandon him, especially when a storm is rolling in, and does her best to li...
by hanna2494
April 13th, 2010, 11:24 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query: A BEAUTIFUL MONSTER
Replies: 20
Views: 3120

Query: A BEAUTIFUL MONSTER

I was told I needed to include more on my query, so here is what I've come up with. Feel free to offer suggestions and opinions! Thank you. NEWEST QUERY AT THE END!! Seventeen-year-old Nicola Summers is surprised to find her boyfriend Tristan chained in the driveway after being beaten by a street ga...
by hanna2494
April 7th, 2010, 11:16 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query: Gilded Wings
Replies: 25
Views: 4111

Re: Query: Gilded Wings

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by hanna2494
April 6th, 2010, 3:55 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query: Gilded Wings
Replies: 25
Views: 4111

Re: Query: Gilded Wings

LATEST QUERY: For seventeen-year-old Nicola Summers, finding her boyfriend Tristan chained to the driveway after being beaten by a street gang was not what she expected to find when taking out the trash. She doesn’t understand his desperation for her to abandon him, especially when a storm is rolli...
by hanna2494
April 6th, 2010, 12:02 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query: Gilded Wings
Replies: 25
Views: 4111

Re: Query: Gilded Wings

QUERY For seventeen-year-old Nicola Summers, finding her boyfriend Tristan chained to the driveway after being mugged by a street gang was not part of the plan. Beaten and knowing the rain is underway, he rejects Nicola’s help. Determined, Nicola tries to liberate him, but when the rain arrives and...
by hanna2494
April 5th, 2010, 1:25 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query- Isabella Vampirella (EVIL EDITOR response at end)
Replies: 36
Views: 5533

Re: Query- Isabella Vampirella (EVIL EDITOR response at end)

Nice! Don't worry about the name (Vampirella). I actually like Isabella Vampirella, it's catchy and it sounds appropriate. There is a movie called Trolls and their main character is names Harry Potter just like J.K. Rowling's Harry Potter. So really don't worry about the name.
by hanna2494
April 4th, 2010, 4:43 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query: Gilded Wings
Replies: 25
Views: 4111

Re: QUERY: FEATHERS (YA -Fantasy-Romance)

Query ____________ For seventeen-year-old Nicola Summers, finding her boyfriend Tristan chained to her driveway was not part of the plan. Struggling to break free from the restraints he was left in after being assaulted by a street gang, he rejects Nicola’s help, knowing the rain is underway. With ...
by hanna2494
April 3rd, 2010, 10:07 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query: Gilded Wings
Replies: 25
Views: 4111

Re: QUERY: FEATHERS (YA -Fantasy-Romance)

Feel free to offer your thoughts and advice, and I'll try to fix those on my query. Thank you. ________________ For seventeen-year-old Nicola Summers, finding her boyfriend Tristan chained to her driveway was not part of the plan. Struggling to break free from his restraints, he rejects Nicola’s hel...
by hanna2494
April 1st, 2010, 8:32 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query: Gilded Wings
Replies: 25
Views: 4111

Query: Gilded Wings

I'm new to the forum. This is the first draft of my query. Feel free to speak your mind, offer your suggestions, and thank you in advance for you help. By the way, this is just the body of the query. NEWEST QUERY AT THE END! _____________ In the midst of a thunderstorm, seventeen-year-old Nicola Sum...