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I'm a first page reader and I think you definitely need an action to start your story, but you don't need "dazzle". Anything your character does, says, or thinks that engages and gives insight to the stakes or characterization counts for me. "Stewart clicked on the refresh button for the tenth time...
- March 17th, 2010, 7:21 pm
- Forum: Town Hall
- Topic: The Introduction Thread
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Afternoon Everyone, After the recent "redistribution of personnel and resources" my company went through two weeks ago I got to catch up with Nathan's blog and learned about the forums from his post. I'm happy to find another forum where I can talk about edits, revisions, submissions and the dreade...