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by Elsie
July 27th, 2019, 8:27 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 28
Views: 16414

Re: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog

Dear Agent [name], Seeker, the boy who has risen to command the Resistance, tells no one where he came from or why he why he joined the rebellion. His army wouldn’t be so loyal if they knew he wasn’t fighting to restore order to the lawless human kingdom, but for the chance to assassinate the king, ...
by Elsie
July 27th, 2019, 8:22 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 46
Views: 22761

Re: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: All the King's Names Genre: YA fantasy 250 words: Chapter 1: The Idea “Wait!” The cry echoed down the narrow, dusty road, barely reaching the town walls. The gatekeeper, who had been winching the gates closed for the night, looked surprised and turned to Seeker for instructions. Seeker squint...