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by JD Revene
June 11th, 2010, 6:51 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 308376

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

APPETITES by David Enever writing as JD Revene Literary Erotica 1st page - 238 words A sultry Sydney night, a woman dances in lingerie hinting at more than it reveals. She pouts and poses, tossing long, dark hair. A couple watch. “Nice tits,” the lady says, leaning into her partner. He turns towards...
by JD Revene
March 5th, 2010, 7:12 pm
Forum: Writing
Topic: Share your opening sentence!
Replies: 236
Views: 45409

Re: Share your opening sentence!

A sultry Sydney night, a woman dances in lingerie hinting at more than it reveals.