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- June 11th, 2010, 6:51 pm
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APPETITES by David Enever writing as JD Revene Literary Erotica 1st page - 238 words A sultry Sydney night, a woman dances in lingerie hinting at more than it reveals. She pouts and poses, tossing long, dark hair. A couple watch. “Nice tits,” the lady says, leaning into her partner. He turns towards...