Nathan Bransford - The Forums

Many thanks for the useful feedback. I have re-cast the query. Here it is: Is it your fault if you inherit psychopathic tendencies from your father? Spotting huge potential for an out of the box psychological thriller set in India, I seek representation for my novel “IT CAN’T BE YOU” completed at 81...

“All men are bastards” says Shefali Belliappa to close my completed 81,000 word psychological thriller “IT CAN’T BE YOU” Her father, a highly decorated war hero, a Lt.Colonel in the Indian Army has changed dramatically due to the psychological trauma of his war wounds. This results in her mother’s d...

I love your writing style for this query- crisp and direct. It has the makings of a fine query.

Suggestions: Am not sure " awesome agent " would be appropriate. As I said, I am not sure:)