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by premrao
February 19th, 2010, 9:59 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query Help: "It Can't Be You"
Replies: 6
Views: 1140

Re: Query Help: "It Can't Be You"

Many thanks for the useful feedback. I have re-cast the query. Here it is: Is it your fault if you inherit psychopathic tendencies from your father? Spotting huge potential for an out of the box psychological thriller set in India, I seek representation for my novel “IT CAN’T BE YOU” completed at 81...
by premrao
February 14th, 2010, 1:40 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query Help: "It Can't Be You"
Replies: 6
Views: 1140

Query Help: "It Can't Be You"

“All men are bastards” says Shefali Belliappa to close my completed 81,000 word psychological thriller “IT CAN’T BE YOU” Her father, a highly decorated war hero, a Lt.Colonel in the Indian Army has changed dramatically due to the psychological trauma of his war wounds. This results in her mother’s d...
by premrao
February 14th, 2010, 1:32 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Thriller Query (Genre, that is). Open to Suggestions!
Replies: 18
Views: 3434

Re: Thriller Query (Genre, that is). Open to Suggestions!

I love your writing style for this query- crisp and direct. It has the makings of a fine query.

Suggestions: Am not sure " awesome agent " would be appropriate. As I said, I am not sure:)