Query Letter: You Dear, Sweet Man
Posted: February 12th, 2010, 5:05 pm
In the neon world of advertising, everything is for grabs: ideas, people, even the future. But, what if the line that separates an advertisement from the real world were suddenly erased? What if the person of your fantasies stepped from an ad and beckoned you to follow her back, inviting you to melt into her world. Could you resist? Bobby Fastow couldn't.
When Charles Hamilton, the CEO of a fast food restaurant chain, decides to change to a venue to healthy food, a very unique variable motion advertisement is produced by an unusual cast of characters, the most intriguing of them being Samantha; her desire to control men becomes an evil obsession, and her manipulation of them and her alter-ego within the ad leads Bobby Fastow into an unpredictable world of advertising. He is a nobody, yet he is everybody whose life is lacking something special.
After boarding a subway car, a woman speaks to him from this fast food company's ad. Megan is the alter-ego of Samantha, an evil, immature model who possesses extra-sensory powers over men by simply using the phrase,"You dear, sweet man." She has an overwhelming sense of revenge against the company's president and board members who have hired her to pose for this most ingenious and captivating ad that moves as a result of vibrations from whatever vehicle it is attached. She is able to manipulate the advertisement's creators into developing her own ad and seduces Bobby into entering the ad to join Megan and become an everlasting part of it.
You Dear, Sweet Man is a 62,000 word, professionally edited, fantasy/suspense in the vein of Twilight Zone works.
Thank you so much for taking the time to consider my work.
When Charles Hamilton, the CEO of a fast food restaurant chain, decides to change to a venue to healthy food, a very unique variable motion advertisement is produced by an unusual cast of characters, the most intriguing of them being Samantha; her desire to control men becomes an evil obsession, and her manipulation of them and her alter-ego within the ad leads Bobby Fastow into an unpredictable world of advertising. He is a nobody, yet he is everybody whose life is lacking something special.
After boarding a subway car, a woman speaks to him from this fast food company's ad. Megan is the alter-ego of Samantha, an evil, immature model who possesses extra-sensory powers over men by simply using the phrase,"You dear, sweet man." She has an overwhelming sense of revenge against the company's president and board members who have hired her to pose for this most ingenious and captivating ad that moves as a result of vibrations from whatever vehicle it is attached. She is able to manipulate the advertisement's creators into developing her own ad and seduces Bobby into entering the ad to join Megan and become an everlasting part of it.
You Dear, Sweet Man is a 62,000 word, professionally edited, fantasy/suspense in the vein of Twilight Zone works.
Thank you so much for taking the time to consider my work.