sierramcconnell wrote:Leila - Her actions definately show it. She's not human, but glamours her form to be anything they wish to get into their lives, eat their energy, and make them ill with diseases. It's one of those demon things that runs in her 'family'. She hates people and hates having to act as one of them to get their energy. And she shows that in her character. That's why I think I hate to make her curse just to show it.
Sommer Leigh wrote:There is nothing I cringe at more than an intense scene where the characters are caught in exclamation, and instead of swearing (like people would do) they say the "polite" swear words like "Heck! Darn! Gosh darn!"
Leila wrote:Without knowing more about your story, it sounds like a little cursing would fit within the context of your story.
Collectonian wrote:Your story sounds awesome! We can get lynched together LOL One of my WIPs, Fall From Grace, features one of the original, and highest, archangels having a love affair with the oldest son of Satan :-D In said novel, several angels discuss what "really" happened versus what was written. Yeah, not likely to win me brownie points, but it works :-)
For the original question, I think it would be fine to have her curse some, particular as she is a demon. It would almost be expected, even in a novel with Christian themes.
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