(Un)Realistic young character dialogue

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Re: (Un)Realistic young character dialogue

Post by Guardian » January 13th, 2011, 4:03 pm

aduson wrote:Even if her own mother is used to hearing her little girl speak older than her age, at some point she must still be amazed at her. Give voice to their amazement but turn it into an amazed acceptance. Create a "now I've seen everything" scene.
I mentioned few pages earlier, that this is in the story, few lines after the mentioned ones. Her mother is mentioning it.

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