Critique Partner for a children's picture book

[kdmac76]

Hello everyone,
I have written a children's picture book. I was wondering if anyone would be willing to take a look at it for me? I just have words right now but I am looking for someone to critique it so that I can make it better for an artist to draw it.

thanks

[ysis]

Hi,

I would be very glad to read your book and give you some suggestions, if I can. I write children's stories too, but I have not published any of them yet.