Fiction short story critique partner's needed

[Mike Dickson]

I wrote a short story that I would like to have two people with experience take a look at. It's about 1700 words, so not too long. I'd like to see if this has potential to be published in a Literary Magazine.

It's gone through one revision for grammacal errors. I'm looking for someone to explain the flaws to this story and also the good points if there are any. Being kind, won't help me advance my craft. I'd like at minimum two people to take a look at it and offer their feedback.

Email me at michaeldickson@live.com and I'll send it over.

Thank you!

[Guardian]

If you're interested in an exchange, I'm gladly do this to you. My short fiction is only 1200 words, so if you're in the exchange, please tell me and I'm sending my one to your email, then you can send yours to that email address.

Regards,

Guardian.

[Mike Dickson]

That would be great guardian, send it over! I'd be happy to look at your WIP.

[Guardian]

Check your mail. :)

[Guardian]

And done. :)

[Mike Dickson]

Much thanks to Guardian for the critique! My story is definitely better.

I'm still looking for other's and would be happy to critique yours as well. My story is now around 1550 words.

[Aimée]

I'd be glad to critique your short story. My email is cheesepuff5292@yahoo.com if you'd like to send it to me. :)

Aimée

[Mike Dickson]

Thanks Aimee.
I sent it to your email.

[Mike Dickson]

I'd still like at least one more person to take a look at my story. Any takers?

Thank you

I'd be happy to exchange!