It's urban/contemporary fantasy and not YA.
I'm looking for big-picture issues here. Does it start in the right place? Is there enough conflict to keep you interested? Was the ending rushed? Etc. Trash the characters, do what you will. I just need positive and negative feedback on this book. I'm feeling like a total hack at the moment and I really could use some objective eyes. It's out with one beta for a male perspective. And part of it is with another for her to decide whether she wants to continue reading.
I'm willing to reciprocate in any capacity, be it a chapter or a whole manuscript. Or a query or a synopsis or even just a sounding board. Thanks.
Beta needed
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Re: Beta needed
Mike and I would be game.
http://sb-writingtheother.blogspot.com/
FORGOTTEN GODS is out September 17th 2011! Check the blog for details.
FORGOTTEN GODS is out September 17th 2011! Check the blog for details.
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Re: Beta needed
Thanks for that. I'm going to hold off on betas until I get the feedback from the person it's with at the moment. I feel like there's a solid, do-over rewrite in this book's near future so I'll keep you two in mind for when I get that done. Thanks again.sbs_mjc1 wrote:Mike and I would be game.
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