CP request for crime/social drama

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graham1981
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CP request for crime/social drama

Post by graham1981 » May 10th, 2015, 8:18 am

Hi all, I'm Graham, 34, and working the day job whilst redrafting a novel whenever I spot a pocket of free time.

I've got a gangly first draft of an adult crime/social drama based in Manchester, England. There's a guy trying to get away from his old life, and a whole mess of circumstances and old friends slowly dragging him down into hell. It's violent, in parts, despite the main character's best efforts at a clean life.

I'd like to link up with someone who wants to critique my novel, and help me see the forest of words from a fresh perspective. Is that you? I'd love to give feedback on your work too.

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Re: CP request for crime/social drama

Post by longknife » May 10th, 2015, 1:33 pm

How many words?

I don't do editing or grammatical analysis.
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