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by Nathan Bransford
November 27th, 2023, 2:50 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Query critique 11/30/23
Replies: 0
Views: 6944

Query critique 11/30/23

Want to see how your editing approach compares to mine? Below is the query up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer...
by Nathan Bransford
November 13th, 2023, 1:50 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Page critique 11/16/23
Replies: 0
Views: 7071

Page critique 11/16/23

Below is the page up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer feedback. When offering your feedback, please please rem...
by Nathan Bransford
November 6th, 2023, 3:20 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Query critique 11/9/23
Replies: 0
Views: 7232

Query critique 11/9/23

Want to see how your editing approach compares to mine? Below is the query up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer...
by Nathan Bransford
October 30th, 2023, 2:18 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Page critique 11/2/23
Replies: 0
Views: 7002

Page critique 11/2/23

Below is the page up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer feedback. When offering your feedback, please please rem...
by Nathan Bransford
October 23rd, 2023, 3:46 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Query critique 10/26/23
Replies: 0
Views: 6678

Query critique 10/26/23

Want to see how your editing approach compares to mine? Below is the query up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer...
by Nathan Bransford
October 16th, 2023, 3:06 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Page critique 10/19/23
Replies: 0
Views: 6446

Page critique 10/19/23

Below is the page up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer feedback. When offering your feedback, please please rem...
by Nathan Bransford
October 10th, 2023, 4:17 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Query critique 10/12/23
Replies: 1
Views: 5690

Query critique 10/12/23

Want to see how your editing approach compares to mine? Below is the query up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer...
by Nathan Bransford
October 2nd, 2023, 1:52 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Page critique 10/5/23
Replies: 0
Views: 8068

Page critique 10/5/23

Below is the page up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer feedback. When offering your feedback, please please rem...
by Nathan Bransford
September 25th, 2023, 2:50 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Query critique 9/28/23
Replies: 0
Views: 7930

Query critique 9/28/23

Want to see how your editing approach compares to mine? Below is the query up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer...
by Nathan Bransford
September 18th, 2023, 3:02 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Page critique 9/21/23
Replies: 0
Views: 7419

Page critique 9/21/23

Below is the page up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer feedback. When offering your feedback, please please rem...
by Nathan Bransford
September 11th, 2023, 4:18 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Query critique 9/14/23
Replies: 0
Views: 6839

Query critique 9/14/23

Want to see how your editing approach compares to mine? Below is the query up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer...
by Nathan Bransford
September 4th, 2023, 4:39 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Page critique 9/7/23
Replies: 1
Views: 5297

Page critique 9/7/23

Below is the page up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer feedback. When offering your feedback, please please rem...
by Nathan Bransford
August 14th, 2023, 3:19 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Query critique 8/17/23
Replies: 0
Views: 6090

Query critique 8/17/23

Want to see how your editing approach compares to mine? Below is the query up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer...
by Nathan Bransford
August 7th, 2023, 2:48 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Page critique 8/10/23
Replies: 0
Views: 5751

Page critique 8/10/23

Below is the page up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer feedback. When offering your feedback, please please rem...
by Nathan Bransford
July 25th, 2023, 1:52 pm
Forum: Ask Nathan
Topic: Elevator Pitch
Replies: 1
Views: 3077

Re: Elevator Pitch

Here's my advice on queries with multiple protagonists: https://nathanbransford.com/blog/2019/0 ... ery-letter

And here's my advice on one sentence pitches: https://nathanbransford.com/blog/2010/0 ... ence-pitch