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by RKeelan
April 11th, 2017, 10:35 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 22
Views: 4374

Re: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: Immortal Genre: Fantasy First 250 words: "The fate of all Creation pivots about certain moments in time and space. One such moment approaches. It is yet distant to you, but to me it is perilously close. I have devised a plan—a grand plan—to employ this moment. You, Nathaniel, shall be my inst...
by RKeelan
April 11th, 2017, 10:30 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 16
Views: 3364

Re: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog

Dear [Agent], Nathan is a slave for sale. It's a good situation, all things considered. He's well fed, gets plenty of rest. His work consists of talking to people who might buy him, but probably won't. Not if Nathan can help it. His oldest friend is Celeste. She's either a deposed God or a voice ins...