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- June 23rd, 2014, 7:23 pm
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Title: The Dog of Pel Genre: Fantasy (250 words) Jamie Pel hammered new shingles onto the roof of his small house. He had chores to finish before the cold came, and it suited him to be up here, alone, as he worked off his anger and irritation. The local girl, his last unofficial liaison, had slammed...