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- August 20th, 2012, 6:35 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Recurrent Universe
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2297
Re: Recurrent Universe
Humans are born free but everywhere they are in chains. In Afghanistan 1998, two soldiers, Taj and Bek, are stationed at a check point near Taloqan, a city in the hands of Anti-Taliban Resistance army. Taj doesn’t remember a day in his life without war. Raised in a lawless society and courteous cult...
- August 18th, 2012, 9:53 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Recurrent Universe
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2297
Recurrent Universe
Dear Ms. Agent, In Afghanistan 1998, four soldiers are stationed at a checkpoint near Taloqan, a city in the hands of the Anti-Taliban Resistance Army. They live in a small recurrent universe of their own, having cut their connections to the rest of the world. Less than ten cars pass by their checkp...
- July 29th, 2012, 8:07 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: A Sky of Stars
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1590
A Sky of Stars
Dear Ms. agent, Wars are fought to bring about peace. When professional mercenary Taj befriends an ascetic and a philosopher he comes to know that life is worth much more than killing. He leaves soldiering and returns to his hometown, promising not to indulge in bloodshed again. But things change wh...
- July 29th, 2012, 8:06 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: A Sky of Stars
- Replies: 0
- Views: 1153
A Sky of Stars
Dear Ms. agent, Wars are fought to bring about peace. When professional mercenary Taj befriends an ascetic and a philosopher he comes to know that life is worth much more than killing. He leaves soldiering and returns to his hometown, promising not to indulge in bloodshed again. But things change wh...
- July 27th, 2012, 3:42 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: SOLDIERS OF ALTRUISM: Literary Fiction
- Replies: 8
- Views: 4005
Re: SOLDIERS OF ALTRUISM: Literary Fiction
Is this an improvement? Dear Ms. agent, Wars are fought to bring about peace. When professional mercenary Taj befriends an ascetic and a philosopher he comes to know life is worth much more than killing. He leaves soldiering and returns to his hometown, promising not to indulge in bloodshed again. B...
- July 26th, 2012, 3:20 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: SOLDIERS OF ALTRUISM: Literary Fiction
- Replies: 8
- Views: 4005
Re: SOLDIERS OF ALTRUISM: Literary Fiction
Dear Ms. Agent, Taj is a professional mercenary who has grown to believe that war is a way of life, and Sarv is another mercenary who has recently joined the profession. Taj and Sarv develop camaraderie while they are at a checkpoint on the outskirts of Taloqan, one of few cities in the north of Afg...
- July 25th, 2012, 10:26 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: SOLDIERS OF ALTRUISM: Literary Fiction
- Replies: 8
- Views: 4005
Re: SOLDIERS OF ALTRUISM: Literary Fiction
Here's another stab. Dear Ms. Agent, Taj is a professional mercenary who has grown to believe that war is a way of life, and Arsh is another who has recently joined the profession. Taj and Arsh develop camaraderie while they are at a checkpoint on the outskirts of Taloqan, one of few cities in the n...
- July 25th, 2012, 10:25 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: SOLDIERS OF ALTRUISM: Literary Fiction
- Replies: 8
- Views: 4005
Re: SOLDIERS OF ALTRUISM: Literary Fiction
Here's another stab. Dear Ms. Agent, Taj is a professional mercenary who has grown to believe that war is a way of life, and Arsh is another who has recently joined the profession. Taj and Arsh develop camaraderie while they are at a checkpoint on the outskirts of Taloqan, one of few cities in the n...
- July 24th, 2012, 1:20 pm
- Forum: Synopses and Plot Outlines
- Topic: SOLDIERS OF ALTRUISM: Literary Fiction
- Replies: 0
- Views: 8855
SOLDIERS OF ALTRUISM: Literary Fiction
All right, since I'm a perfectionist, I worked more on my synopsis. Because it's a literary fiction I quoted my characters and added their believes to the synopsis. I hope it's better than the previous one. TAJ is a professional mercenary who has grown to believe that war is a way of life, and BEK i...
- July 24th, 2012, 11:22 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: SOLDIERS OF ALTRUISM: Literary Fiction
- Replies: 8
- Views: 4005
SOLDIERS OF ALTRUISM: Literary Fiction
Dear Ms. agent, When guns speak, morality is silent. Taj is a cruel mercenary who believes that war is a way of life, and Arsh is another who is low on cruelty and other skills a mercenary need. The two are comrades stationed at a checkpoint on the outskirts of Taloqan, one of few cities in north of...