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by wendy
April 14th, 2017, 3:23 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 22
Views: 4459

Re: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: Winter Roses Never DIe Genre: Paranormal, Mystic Christianity PROLOGUE ~First Meeting~ With fairy eyes she sees beyond an earthly reality before he falls like the rain and rises like the sun into her day 'I know you I met you once upon a dream' *From Once Upon A Dream – Lyrics by Jack Lawrenc...
by wendy
April 2nd, 2014, 9:02 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 231861

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Old library doors of wood and glass rumbled apart, and a female garbed in a colourful array appeared in the opening. With awkwardness and frustration she struggled to maintain her grip on two large books, a bunch of keys and the shoulder bag fighting to escape her narrow shoulder. The keys in her ri...