Nathan Bransford - The Forums

title: Sara LeClere, Missing in Action genre: middle grade fiction wc: 250 author: agyw Chapter One Spring 1972 I didn’t REALLY name him. “Scoot, Cussed Cat! If Mimi catches you, she’ll swat you!” I scold Cussy away from the squabble of hens and chicks. He loves to terrorize them. I don’t think he’d...

I would read more of this, and the two criticisms I would offer, too much interjection and a difficult comparison to The Lovely Bones, would be noted. I think Dearth of Reason did a wonderful job of bringing the flow and writing to the point. The only reason I interject, I think this could be pushed...