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by pbloom
December 24th, 2023, 6:27 pm
Forum: Ask Nathan
Topic: From Edits by Nathan to publication
Replies: 0
Views: 2856

From Edits by Nathan to publication

I just submitted a query that I hope Mr. Bransford reviews because the last (and only) time I submitted something, it was the first page of a short story I have been dabbling with for several years. I always knew the first page lacked something, but couldn't capture what was missing until I submitte...
by pbloom
December 24th, 2023, 6:20 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 155
Views: 128112

Query: Beyond the Leash

Beyond the Leash A Memoir of Service and Science (Pets/Memoir: approx 94,000 words) Patricia A. Bloom, Ph.D. December 24, 2023 Dear [Mr./Ms. Agent’s Name], A recent listing in Query Tracker noted “pets” among your areas of interest for representation. In this regard, I thought Beyond the Leash: A M...