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- October 6th, 2023, 7:06 pm
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Topic: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Thanks for any feedback, Nathan! Dear (agent), I’m excited to send you WHISPERS FROM THE CURSED CASTLE, my 46,000-word middle-grade mystery manuscript because (insert specific reason here). “What was that?” Ten-year-old Joe doesn’t know what’s in the window of the town’s haunted house, but once he t...
- September 29th, 2023, 7:16 pm
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Topic: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Title: The Secret of the Haunted Castle Genre: Middle grade, Fantasy/Adventure First 250 words: “Whoa,” I whispered to Buster. “What is that?” He didn’t answer me. He couldn’t. He was too busy peeing on a fire hydrant. Oh, sorry. Buster’s my dog. And I’m Joe. I’m 10, and everything I’m about to tell...