Im sorry I have no input, but I absolutely LOVE this query. Well done : )
I would just cross of the "please email me request" : )
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- September 10th, 2013, 3:04 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: YA Science Fiction Query
- Replies: 3
- Views: 3434
- September 10th, 2013, 3:02 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query for In Death
- Replies: 2
- Views: 3551
Query for In Death
Hi Everyone, Appreciate the feedback : ) "Falling for a dead guy isn’t part of Santana Jones’ plans, but John Braver, the incredibly charming and incredibly dead politician on the other side of the mirror, makes it really hard not to. When she finds out that her mirror is a window to purgatory,...
- February 16th, 2013, 5:16 am
- Forum: Social Media and Book Promotion
- Topic: POLL FOR ASPIRING WRITERS
- Replies: 0
- Views: 6301
POLL FOR ASPIRING WRITERS
Hey Everyone,
I'm gathering some data for my next blog post, would you mind answering two tiny questions (if you're an aspiring writer)?
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Thank you so much!!!
Bests,
I'm gathering some data for my next blog post, would you mind answering two tiny questions (if you're an aspiring writer)?
http://clarawaibel.wordpress.com/2013/0 ... flowchart/
Thank you so much!!!
Bests,
- February 21st, 2012, 10:54 am
- Forum: Connect With a Critique Partner
- Topic: Critique YA Fantasy
- Replies: 1
- Views: 2184
Critique YA Fantasy
Hi Guys, I'm looking for a critique partner for my YA Fantasy (90k words). We can start exchanging 15 pages and then see where it goes : ) I try to work on the usual: plot outline, character development, flow and inconsistencies, but I will also check major grammar issues. I would like my critique p...
- November 23rd, 2011, 3:04 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: YA Fantasy: Where Hurricanes Sleep
- Replies: 8
- Views: 3752
Re: YA Fantasy: Where Hurricanes Sleep
Thanks Wilderness! : D I tried to add a bit more on the boys, and I corrected the small mistakes... Hoping it worked. : )
- November 23rd, 2011, 3:02 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query--Fantasy novel
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2949
Re: Query--Fantasy novel
The Dark Kingdom is a fantasy novel set in London during a period of imbalance (Imbalance reads odd) in the world, where vampires are endeavouring to either drink or turn all of the humans. A noble priesthood that practices white magic is desperately seeking the one person who can save the human ra...
- November 22nd, 2011, 4:16 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: YA Fantasy: Where Hurricanes Sleep
- Replies: 8
- Views: 3752
- November 18th, 2011, 3:07 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: YA Fantasy: Where Hurricanes Sleep
- Replies: 8
- Views: 3752
YA Fantasy: Where Hurricanes Sleep
Hi folks, I'm back from rejection-land...aaagain. :D I tried to re-do my query and this is the latest version. As always, any feedback is extremely appreciated. Thanks for the help guys!! Cheerios! Dear Agent, Fifteen-year-old Jade Kadeem has it worse than your average Wind-Rider: She can’t control ...
- August 6th, 2011, 5:15 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: VERSION 6 REVISED: Query: Awakening
- Replies: 21
- Views: 7678
Re: NEW Re: REVISED: Query: Awakening
Dear Ms./Mr. Agent, Fifteen-year-old Amanda is inconsolable when she accidently overhears the fact she has an abducted twin sister. (How about "when she discovers she has an abducted twin sister?) She is flabbergasted (I loved this word!!! No idea what it means though, so I'd take the simple h...
- August 5th, 2011, 5:07 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: *REVISED* Jade's Hurricane New Adult Fantasy
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2449
Re: *REVISED* Jade's Hurricane New Adult Fantasy
Hey guys, brilliant critiques!
Is this any better?
Is this any better?
- July 29th, 2011, 9:43 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: *REVISED* Jade's Hurricane New Adult Fantasy
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2449
*REVISED* Jade's Hurricane New Adult Fantasy
Hi Guys, Back from the query tranches, hopefully I"ll be more successful in the future. As always, your feedback is greatly appreciated! :D NEW VERSION: The wind is stupid. Or at least, it’s having a laugh at thirteen year old Jade Kadeem. If the wind obeyed Jade, like it does to every other wi...
- July 29th, 2011, 9:37 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query - Somewhere In Between - YA urban fantasy *Revised*
- Replies: 9
- Views: 3378
Re: Query - Somewhere In Between - YA urban fantasy
What do you mean by "sending his senses overdrive"? this is a great time to be specific.
I'd also let us know sooner whats the destiny mumbo jambo.
Wouldnt mention series potential, but you have overall a good query. : )
I'd also let us know sooner whats the destiny mumbo jambo.
Wouldnt mention series potential, but you have overall a good query. : )
- July 29th, 2011, 9:34 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: *Revised* QUERY: THE DRAKE WAR
- Replies: 40
- Views: 15382
Re: *Revised* QUERY: THE DRAKE WAR
I think it's a great query, it entices curiosity and it matches with what the book is.
I never got not even a smart reply like that from agents, so, you're lucky! : )
I never got not even a smart reply like that from agents, so, you're lucky! : )
- May 27th, 2011, 6:27 am
- Forum: Connect With a Critique Partner
- Topic: CP for fantasy YA
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1920
CP for fantasy YA
Seeking thorough CP for YA Fantasy : ) Query below, in case you are interested. While all other wind riders play Windolie or fly in Pings, thirteen year old Jade Kadeem has to worry about the monstrous hurricanes she creates against her will. And ever since her father was murdered in a hate crime, i...
- March 26th, 2011, 12:31 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Jade's Hurricane YA Fantasy
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1117
Jade's Hurricane YA Fantasy
Hi everybody, Appreciate all the help I can get, this is my 11 th try (going mad here people). Thank you! Dear agent, While all other wind riders fly in Pings or play Windolie, thirteen year old Jade Kadeem has to worry about the monstrous hurricanes she creates against her will. And ever since her ...