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by rmabry
October 4th, 2010, 5:04 pm
Forum: Writing
Topic: No Mile Along The Journey Is Wasted
Replies: 1
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No Mile Along The Journey Is Wasted

My children must have hated some of our family road trips. From the moment we were out of the driveway with me behind the wheel, I was focused on my goal: getting there. Bathroom stops were grudging, food consumed at a gallop. It couldn’t have been easy for my sweet, patient wife. After it was much ...
by rmabry
June 9th, 2010, 1:38 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 452012

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: Strong Medicine Genre: Medical suspense Word count: 242 The woman’s imploring look pierced the heart of Dr. Sara Miles. “Do you know yet what’s wrong with Chelsea?” Chelsea Ferguson lay still and pale as a mannequin in the hospital bed. IV’s carried their precious cargo of fluids and medicati...